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Great job

Especialy on style, color and music... I loved your story too... Finaly a movie with a good plot!
You could have put subtitles, sometimes it's hard to understand what they say...

Voice acting...

I understand you think of doing it with voices, but until someone presents herself... You should just get the movie out with the text as you did for the last 5 parts... Surely it's something that's not really as nice as if there were voices but at least you'll be satisfying people like me that loved this movie-game an hopes to see the end...
Perhaps do something else for texts but just get another episode out... I sure some girl would act once they see the movie...
I still hope to see the conclusion. With voices or without, I don't care... :D

Not bad... In fact, I liked it. :)

It's good for an unfinished movie, you have a great idea, now finish it, the tail of the apothem XD, you have to work on this, it's awful... The way it moves...

Some ameliorations are needed

First of all, I have to say I liked this game, but there are little problem concerning to aiming thing. To kill a pidgeon you have to be aiming its head... Many time (I retry and experimented to verify this idea) when you aim for the belly or another place that is on the bird the too far away from the head, the game doesn't count it as dead.
I don't know if its because its not a deadly part, but I don't think you planned some one-shot-kill places and some other many-shot-kill places.
Apart from this aiming problem (That could be solved easily) the game is great... Perhaps you could put a little animating when a bird dies, it's a littkle absurd that when you kill a bird it disapeared that way... Makeit look more realistic.

It funny but...

That's a funny thing to wast four minutes, but then nothing, the problems are there's only one form, add a square, a triangle, etc, the controls are really complicate too. Work on the colors, it's ony the primar ones, make them change sometime.
But except that it cool.

And it's only the demo...

I just can't wait for the final version, world 2 is even better then world 1. The effect of grabbing walls is almost perfect (jsut the hair disapeared when you grab one, but it's only a little bug), the p[ossibilitoes are great, the smoke is a good idea too.

But it would be better if when you fall from very high, you could lose some life, because I fell from the top to the ground and didn't lose a single point. Or when you fall, you could lose your star, that blow all around you and you have to catch them back...

Finish the game fast, pleeeaase...